Walk on water but sink on land,
Write with your foot but not your hand,
Warm on the snow but freezing on the sand,
In the land off Floo ‘Pa- Doo,
Giant feet playing in the street,
Toothless tigers who like a treat,
Smelly frogs getting down with the beat,
In the land of Floo ‘Pa- Doo.
By
Thomas P
I think that Thomas has worked really hard to do this. Consequently, he has finished up with a brilliant piece of work! Though it isn’t that long, what we have is a great success!I love the name and I think that the first verse is sort of describing the opposites about all the different things, and that has worked really well.
By: Lily L on October 9, 2009
at 7:17 pm
I agree! And what a beautifully constructed comment Lily L!
By: Mr Robertson on October 9, 2009
at 8:57 pm